Comments on: Invitation to interact in this poem http://brightsilentthought.wordpress.com/2008/07/06/invitation-to-interact-in-this-poem/ Thu, 04 Dec 2008 21:24:35 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: brightsilentthought http://brightsilentthought.wordpress.com/2008/07/06/invitation-to-interact-in-this-poem/#comment-223 brightsilentthought Wed, 24 Sep 2008 18:57:59 +0000 http://brightsilentthought.wordpress.com/?p=121#comment-223 Rain dripping beyond the window, Steady downpour - You capture child-like essence in your freshness Am I aware? Are you? Are you conscious of your impact, The effect you have on me? Do you realise your power To dispel my fears? Inventing stars, creating light and shadows, Coffee and cigars, Warmth surrounds me Am I aware? Are you? Are you ready for your calling, To write about the rain? Will you carry the star-flow, And open a path to the valley of desires? Are you aware of the warmth that surrounds you, The soft powdery light? --- Thanks. I appreciate your feedback on my writing. Rain dripping beyond the window,
Steady downpour -
You capture child-like essence in your freshness
Am I aware?

Are you? Are you conscious of your impact,
The effect you have on me?
Do you realise your power
To dispel my fears?

Inventing stars, creating light and shadows,
Coffee and cigars,
Warmth surrounds me
Am I aware?

Are you? Are you ready for your calling,
To write about the rain?
Will you carry the star-flow,
And open a path to the valley of desires?

Are you aware of the warmth that surrounds you,
The soft powdery light?

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Thanks. I appreciate your feedback on my writing.

]]> By: Val http://brightsilentthought.wordpress.com/2008/07/06/invitation-to-interact-in-this-poem/#comment-222 Val Tue, 23 Sep 2008 14:24:49 +0000 http://brightsilentthought.wordpress.com/?p=121#comment-222 Rain dripping beyond the window, Steady downpour - You capture child-like essence in your freshness Am I aware? Inventing stars, creating light and shadows, Coffee and cigars, Warmth surrounds me Am I aware? Great blog here! You are a good writer - I enjoy your positive message and I am happy to have stumbled upon your site. Rain dripping beyond the window,
Steady downpour -
You capture child-like essence in your freshness
Am I aware?

Inventing stars, creating light and shadows,
Coffee and cigars,
Warmth surrounds me
Am I aware?

Great blog here! You are a good writer – I enjoy your positive message and I am happy to have stumbled upon your site.

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