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Rain dripping beyond the window,
Steady downpour -
You capture child-like essence in your freshness.
Inventing stars, creating light and shadows,
Coffee and cigars,
Warmth surrounds me.
Rain dripping beyond the window,
Steady downpour -
You capture child-like essence in your freshness
Am I aware?
Inventing stars, creating light and shadows,
Coffee and cigars,
Warmth surrounds me
Am I aware?
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Rain dripping beyond the window,
Steady downpour -
You capture child-like essence in your freshness
Am I aware?
Are you? Are you conscious of your impact,
The effect you have on me?
Do you realise your power
To dispel my fears?
Inventing stars, creating light and shadows,
Coffee and cigars,
Warmth surrounds me
Am I aware?
Are you? Are you ready for your calling,
To write about the rain?
Will you carry the star-flow,
And open a path to the valley of desires?
Are you aware of the warmth that surrounds you,
The soft powdery light?
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Thanks. I appreciate your feedback on my writing.